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| Reflection |
After the feedback session last week and as we get closer to writing our full first draft of our screenplay, i have been developing my idea and decided to call it 'Revelation'. I have begun finalising all of my research, for example i took inspiration from a particular storyline of long running BBC Drama Waterloo Road and based some of my research upon this - to be uploaded as part of my research in due course. Upon reflection i have written out a short synopsis of my screenplay, replacing aspects of my original idea with some from the feedback session and new ones i have come up with.
Revelation
Amanda lives in a house, opposite a man named
Dave. We first see Amanda in her house, cleaning, doing the washing up or
drinking,
she looks very down, her house is very clean
and very modern. We see her look out the window, at her neighbour Dave getting out of his car,
a voice behind her appears (her friend or
relative) asking if that is him - is that her dad. They argue about whether she
should reveal herself as
his daughter or not. She goes over to his
house, introducing herself as his neighbour (however she shows every intention
of revealing her true
identity). She views his house, he has pictures
of children (presumably his daughters-her sisters) and then as she is about to
talk to him properly
(after some general neighbourly chit chat) he
receives a phone call from his panicked daughter, this makes Amanda realise
that he has his own
family, that he doesn’t need her and she, being
a young and successful women, doesn’t need him either. She walks out of his
house as a mere
neighbour and continues every day as this.
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